Sunday, July 23, 2006

A Walk with You


Will you walk with me
deep into the woods
And live with life
to cherish her seasonal moods
And feel the ecstasy
of the morn's joyous heart
As it kisseth the ravishing
Earth with art
And get mesmerised
by the silent night
As the heavens shower stars
blending glory with the sight.

Will you walk with me
on the blue paths untrod
Wrapped with serenity
unto the abode of God
And touch the sanctity
of the sky infinite
Feeling the pleasure
of life's greatest delight
And swing on time
with a promise from thee
That thy shall walk
thus forever with me.

Copyright ©2005 Diksha Patitpavan Neel
http://atta-deep-bhav.blogspot.com/

42 comments:

Heart Of Darkness said...

Lovely poem and picture!

Strictly for my friends said...

I would definitely walk with whoever wrote so beautifully to me.

I get very taken in by beautiful love poetry. :))

Thanks for coming by!

samrina said...

Beautiful thought n beautiful words:)

Takecare.

Meg said...

That was very erotically spiritual...if that makes any sense. Great post!

starry nights said...

That was a beautiful poem.thanks for sharing.

Kuan Gung said...

diksha is a great writer...I just wish there was more then what is on the blog there...thank you all...

Kuan Gung said...

siddartha...yes there is a different song here for every month that starts up when you click on the month...thank you

Kuan Gung said...

Good way of putting it meg...

Kuan Gung said...

Thank you heart of darkness...strickly for my friends....I agree...also thank you samrina & starry nights...I'd like to post some more of yours too!

samuru999 said...

Thanks for sharing that poem
written by Diksha... It was
very beautiful.
Hope all is well with you.

butterflygirl said...

Wow...

Keshi said...

so beautiful!

Keshi.

Mindinside said...

No matter where you are
heaven above or earth

it's the one you care about
the one you walk with.

Neers said...

wow!! this IS beautiful, Kuan!! thanks for sharing! :)

Cinderella said...

My god...this was breath-taking !!

I'm purely hyptonised..hypnotised by each and every line was brilliant,passionate and heavenly !!

You are one super-good poet who reminded me of John Donne,my favouritest !

So much like..
"Sweetest love I do not go for weariness of thee,
nor in search the world can show a better love than thee.."

Beautiful !

Cinderella said...

And yes..I totally agree with Meg..this was indeed erotic and spiritual at the same time.
Now I felt like I've said what i actually intended to.
Thnx 'Meg' and you above all.

Kuan Gung said...

samuru...butterflytgirl...keshi...thank you...she is quite the talent...

Kuan Gung said...

true mindinside...

Kuan Gung said...

there's a little bit of you in this neers...great images...

Kuan Gung said...

cinderella...I agree with both of you...I've read this so many times...it's really moving

Lindsey said...

Beautiful!

Kuan Gung said...

Wow linny nice picture...thank you for commenting and visiting...

Cergie said...

Coucou Kuan Gung, thank you for visiting my blog and writting a comment.
Each blog is so different !
I don't read English very well, but I find your pictures beautiful.
Specially the wood in autumn. It's so peaceful and refreshing ! The weather is so hot in France now !

Contented said...

Awww..Beautiful one..Thanks for sharing..

Kuan Gung said...

cergie...thank you...it's been incredibly hot here to and is suppose to get even warmer this weekend...as northerners we don't handle waether like this very well...

Kuan Gung said...

contented...thank you for sommenting and visiting...

Kathleen said...

these words are drunk with Love... (as Hafiz says...) beautiful!

Suji said...

Wow! That is really beautiful. Thanx for sharing.

Arti Honrao said...

Simple yet beautiful!
... "And swing on time
with a promise from thee
That thy shall walk
thus forever with me."

Each one of us that walk the earth look forward to a promise of such kind!
Well-written!


GBU
Arti

s0ulasylum said...

words woven so beautifully! an absolutely amazing piece!

thanks for stopping by! :)

Neers said...

heyyy Kuan... just felt like saying hello and also that you have a good time on your trip... am headed to south east asia... singapore and the likes... hoping to take it easy all by myself... for 2 weeks...

Kuan Gung said...

Thank you kathleen & suji for visiting...there's some great pens out there!

Kuan Gung said...

Indeed arti...indeed...the dream, if only realized...thank you

Kuan Gung said...

sOulasyluum...thank you for visiting...of course I agree...

Kuan Gung said...

Wonderful neers...keep that pen close by, you never know when your experiences become an inspired piece...what a great trip & 2 weeks...enjoy your journey & tahnk you....

Emissary.Christine said...

oh goodness -- this poem was was a heart opener. beautiful...

Kuan Gung said...

thank you christine...

priya said...

Cool pictures and the words are worth reading...

Shakhi said...

Its really lovely, the words are simply beautiful!

Saurabh said...

Very Romantic and Touching! Thanks for collecting the best poems out there for us to read. Your taste is very good!

Kuan Gung said...

Thank you all

kermit johnson said...

I love it. Thank you . You made my day.