Sunday, July 23, 2006

A Walk with You


Will you walk with me
deep into the woods
And live with life
to cherish her seasonal moods
And feel the ecstasy
of the morn's joyous heart
As it kisseth the ravishing
Earth with art
And get mesmerised
by the silent night
As the heavens shower stars
blending glory with the sight.

Will you walk with me
on the blue paths untrod
Wrapped with serenity
unto the abode of God
And touch the sanctity
of the sky infinite
Feeling the pleasure
of life's greatest delight
And swing on time
with a promise from thee
That thy shall walk
thus forever with me.

Copyright ©2005 Diksha Patitpavan Neel
http://atta-deep-bhav.blogspot.com/
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39 comments:

  1. DizzieJuly 23, 2006

    Lovely poem and picture!

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  2. Strictly for my friendsJuly 24, 2006

    I would definitely walk with whoever wrote so beautifully to me.

    I get very taken in by beautiful love poetry. :))

    Thanks for coming by!

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  3. Sam!!July 24, 2006

    Beautiful thought n beautiful words:)

    Takecare.

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  4. starryJuly 24, 2006

    That was a beautiful poem.thanks for sharing.

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  5. Kuan GungJuly 24, 2006

    diksha is a great writer...I just wish there was more then what is on the blog there...thank you all...

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  6. Kuan GungJuly 24, 2006

    siddartha...yes there is a different song here for every month that starts up when you click on the month...thank you

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  7. Kuan GungJuly 24, 2006

    Good way of putting it meg...

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  8. Kuan GungJuly 24, 2006

    Thank you heart of darkness...strickly for my friends....I agree...also thank you samrina & starry nights...I'd like to post some more of yours too!

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  9. MargieJuly 24, 2006

    Thanks for sharing that poem
    written by Diksha... It was
    very beautiful.
    Hope all is well with you.

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  10. butterflygirlJuly 24, 2006

    Wow...

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  11. KeshiJuly 25, 2006

    so beautiful!

    Keshi.

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  12. NeerJuly 25, 2006

    wow!! this IS beautiful, Kuan!! thanks for sharing! :)

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  13. CinderellaJuly 25, 2006

    My god...this was breath-taking !!

    I'm purely hyptonised..hypnotised by each and every line was brilliant,passionate and heavenly !!

    You are one super-good poet who reminded me of John Donne,my favouritest !

    So much like..
    "Sweetest love I do not go for weariness of thee,
    nor in search the world can show a better love than thee.."

    Beautiful !

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  14. CinderellaJuly 25, 2006

    And yes..I totally agree with Meg..this was indeed erotic and spiritual at the same time.
    Now I felt like I've said what i actually intended to.
    Thnx 'Meg' and you above all.

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  15. Kuan GungJuly 25, 2006

    samuru...butterflytgirl...keshi...thank you...she is quite the talent...

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  16. Kuan GungJuly 25, 2006

    true mindinside...

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  17. Kuan GungJuly 25, 2006

    there's a little bit of you in this neers...great images...

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  18. Kuan GungJuly 25, 2006

    cinderella...I agree with both of you...I've read this so many times...it's really moving

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  19. LindseyJuly 25, 2006

    Beautiful!

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  20. Kuan GungJuly 25, 2006

    Wow linny nice picture...thank you for commenting and visiting...

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  21. CergieJuly 26, 2006

    Coucou Kuan Gung, thank you for visiting my blog and writting a comment.
    Each blog is so different !
    I don't read English very well, but I find your pictures beautiful.
    Specially the wood in autumn. It's so peaceful and refreshing ! The weather is so hot in France now !

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  22. HimavanJuly 26, 2006

    Awww..Beautiful one..Thanks for sharing..

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  23. Kuan GungJuly 26, 2006

    cergie...thank you...it's been incredibly hot here to and is suppose to get even warmer this weekend...as northerners we don't handle waether like this very well...

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  24. Kuan GungJuly 26, 2006

    contented...thank you for sommenting and visiting...

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  25. KathleenJuly 26, 2006

    these words are drunk with Love... (as Hafiz says...) beautiful!

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  26. SujiJuly 27, 2006

    Wow! That is really beautiful. Thanx for sharing.

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  27. Arti HonraoJuly 27, 2006

    Simple yet beautiful!
    ... "And swing on time
    with a promise from thee
    That thy shall walk
    thus forever with me."

    Each one of us that walk the earth look forward to a promise of such kind!
    Well-written!


    GBU
    Arti

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  28. s0ulasylumJuly 27, 2006

    words woven so beautifully! an absolutely amazing piece!

    thanks for stopping by! :)

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  29. NeerJuly 27, 2006

    heyyy Kuan... just felt like saying hello and also that you have a good time on your trip... am headed to south east asia... singapore and the likes... hoping to take it easy all by myself... for 2 weeks...

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  30. Kuan GungJuly 27, 2006

    Thank you kathleen & suji for visiting...there's some great pens out there!

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  31. Kuan GungJuly 27, 2006

    Indeed arti...indeed...the dream, if only realized...thank you

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  32. Kuan GungJuly 27, 2006

    sOulasyluum...thank you for visiting...of course I agree...

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  33. Kuan GungJuly 27, 2006

    Wonderful neers...keep that pen close by, you never know when your experiences become an inspired piece...what a great trip & 2 weeks...enjoy your journey & tahnk you....

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  34. Emissary.ChristineJuly 28, 2006

    oh goodness -- this poem was was a heart opener. beautiful...

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  35. Kuan GungJuly 30, 2006

    thank you christine...

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  36. PriyaJuly 31, 2006

    Cool pictures and the words are worth reading...

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  37. Saurabh BanerjeeAugust 15, 2006

    Very Romantic and Touching! Thanks for collecting the best poems out there for us to read. Your taste is very good!

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  38. Kuan GungAugust 21, 2006

    Thank you all

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  39. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2008

    I love it. Thank you . You made my day.

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