We were the glory seekers, the fading stars
desperately trying to inspire.
We were the ones shouting "Vivant la vie boheme!
Vie aux révolution!"and raising our glasses to decadence.
It was us who attended old Mass three times weekly,
for the beauty of the language, and worshipped at brothels each night.
We were the silhouettes on table tops and roof tops,
singing odes to humanity in our crude vernacular.
We were the neo-linguists, the neo-classicals,
obsessed with the avant garde while our lives decayed.
Ours were the high and noble minds which kept us, penniless,
desperately trying to inspire.
We were the ones shouting "Vivant la vie boheme!
Vie aux révolution!"and raising our glasses to decadence.
It was us who attended old Mass three times weekly,
for the beauty of the language, and worshipped at brothels each night.
We were the silhouettes on table tops and roof tops,
singing odes to humanity in our crude vernacular.
We were the neo-linguists, the neo-classicals,
obsessed with the avant garde while our lives decayed.
Ours were the high and noble minds which kept us, penniless,
in bare apartments while the bourgoise sank into wealth.
We were the ones who spoke of love, wrote those endless songs,
and reveled in our freedom.
Ours were the enlightened booksthat fell flat in the over-stocked markets
while our contemporaries' soared to fame.
Ours were the voices, raised
on limelit stages, in darkened coffee shops, on lamp-lit corners
filling the empty nights.
We were the ones who spoke of love, wrote those endless songs,
and reveled in our freedom.
Ours were the enlightened booksthat fell flat in the over-stocked markets
while our contemporaries' soared to fame.
Ours were the voices, raised
on limelit stages, in darkened coffee shops, on lamp-lit corners
filling the empty nights.
Briseis Phemonoe
Briseis is a 15 year old talented young lady at
26 comments:
lovely poem!
Beautiful poem and from a 15yr old. will check her site out.thanks for sharing.
Wonderful poetry and great blog! Thank you for stopping by mine.
Thanks for visiting. Your blog is lovely and well-written. Considered yourself linked and my new blog pal.
Thank you for your visit and your kind words! abt putting it on ur blog of course u can. i liked ur blog its a great collection pieces ...
strangely enuff...this poem brings me back to the musical "Les Miserables"...the young fighting for a better tomorrow...i love it!
excellent poem! Thanx for the link.
Thank you for sharing this Kaun... I can't believe a 15 yr. old wrote this, it's pretty incredible.
And thank you Kaun for your kind words on my blog. I take it as an extreme compliment since you seem to feature pretty incredible poetry here on your blog. Good taste.
Amazing poem from someone so young!
I really enjoyed it!
Thanks!
eating poetry...you have a great blog and carry a mighty pen...some truly wonderful stuff there...great talent!
Thank you white forest and starry for stopping by and complimenting this young lady...
Nice site enemy of the republic...very nice...
thanks anali and prerona I like visiting...
black feline...great point...it's really interesting where she drew these verses from...
samuru...Margie...wow you've really posted some very strong stuff in your site...great stuff there...I enjoy visiting and would like to post some here...thank you.
thanks ghost particle I enjoy visiting there...
this definitely is deep!! and that take on intuition was absolutely what i believe in, Kuan, thanks for sharing! :)
Thank you neers, I sincerely also appreciate your comment on intuition. It is incredible when developed...and trusted...
tiesha...thanks...really like your blog...
Kuan
Thank you for the comment in 'neers'
15 years old is not a lady, she is a girl !!!
And Am I surprised ?
Yes I am. Off to her now.
She's a great writer when she focuses on writings such as this...very mature and articulate young lady too...thank you jac
Mature young person here that is very impressive and insightful with lovely verse.
WOW thats a real talent I must say ...thanks for sharing
Cheers
Thank you Dawn...I'm certain she appeciates your kind words...
I was running through some work online when your lovely visit and comment popped up at my site, and I wish to thank you for honoring me by bringing your light and leaving your mark at my site. I have browsed through your amazing site here and love what I see. The postings you choose are thoughtful and beautiful and provide such inspiration with sharing of light and love. Thank you for being such a beacon for online wanderers.
Blessings, joy, and peace flowing to you.
Thank you so very much for your kind words...
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