Flowing over the edge
Falling freely with force
Tumbling down the hard rocks
Falling yet again,
With hopes of reaching the final destination
My life is somewhat like this
I await when I'll be one with the omniscient one
© Arti Honrao
A stroll down the path of life
10 comments:
I love her poetry!
This is a beautiful poem!
Beautiful poem.right now my life feels like it is falling.
hey Kuan! a plesant surprise! :) and thank you again! *curtsey* :)
I do too margie...wonderful verse..
It's those tides starry...the high tides will return and ride that crest for as long as you can...warm greetings
Thank you neers...you have to love arti and her great talent for verse...
creating an edge
carrying freely with force
gravelling the hard rocks
with no halt attitude
with struggle to reach
to live back in womb - sea
Very nice known stranger...
liking these poems.....
kalpana...if you haven't been to artis' site yet, you have to visit there...thank her and thank you...
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