Wednesday, September 06, 2006

Falling



Flowing over the edge
Falling freely with force
Tumbling down the hard rocks
Falling yet again,
With hopes of reaching the final destination

My life is somewhat like this
I await when I'll be one with the omniscient one


© Arti Honrao

11 comments:

samuru999 said...

I love her poetry!
This is a beautiful poem!

starry nights said...

Beautiful poem.right now my life feels like it is falling.

Neers said...

hey Kuan! a plesant surprise! :) and thank you again! *curtsey* :)

Kuan Gung said...

I do too margie...wonderful verse..

Kuan Gung said...

It's those tides starry...the high tides will return and ride that crest for as long as you can...warm greetings

Kuan Gung said...

Thank you neers...you have to love arti and her great talent for verse...

Known Stranger said...

creating an edge
carrying freely with force
gravelling the hard rocks
with no halt attitude
with struggle to reach
to live back in womb - sea

Kuan Gung said...

Very nice known stranger...

Kalpana said...

liking these poems.....

Kuan Gung said...

kalpana...if you haven't been to artis' site yet, you have to visit there...thank her and thank you...

piika said...

this is such a beautiful image!