Wednesday, September 06, 2006

Falling



Flowing over the edge
Falling freely with force
Tumbling down the hard rocks
Falling yet again,
With hopes of reaching the final destination

My life is somewhat like this
I await when I'll be one with the omniscient one


© Arti Honrao
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10 comments:

  1. MargieSeptember 06, 2006

    I love her poetry!
    This is a beautiful poem!

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  2. starrySeptember 06, 2006

    Beautiful poem.right now my life feels like it is falling.

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  3. NeerSeptember 07, 2006

    hey Kuan! a plesant surprise! :) and thank you again! *curtsey* :)

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  4. Kuan GungSeptember 07, 2006

    I do too margie...wonderful verse..

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  5. Kuan GungSeptember 07, 2006

    It's those tides starry...the high tides will return and ride that crest for as long as you can...warm greetings

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  6. Kuan GungSeptember 07, 2006

    Thank you neers...you have to love arti and her great talent for verse...

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  7. Known StrangerSeptember 09, 2006

    creating an edge
    carrying freely with force
    gravelling the hard rocks
    with no halt attitude
    with struggle to reach
    to live back in womb - sea

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  8. Kuan GungSeptember 09, 2006

    Very nice known stranger...

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  9. KalpanaSeptember 09, 2006

    liking these poems.....

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  10. Kuan GungSeptember 10, 2006

    kalpana...if you haven't been to artis' site yet, you have to visit there...thank her and thank you...

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