Friday, March 02, 2007


Out of the Valley of the West, upon their snow-white steeds,
and into ancient legends passed bright men with shining deeds.
Their heralds, made of cloth-of-gold trailed bright banners
in the seaward breeze that spoke of hoary years of old
and a history of times unseen.

Bright Kings of aeons past were they,
who ruled beyond the Western Sea and slew great daemons,
and lived with fey in years of unknown centuries.
Their look was wise, their carriage proud,
their armour held a starry sheen,
their aged trumpets echoed loud as they rode in from the Sea.

Through hanging forests, deep and cold upon a winding,
unknown trailthey rode- noble, proud and bold.
Dark were the shadows upon their mail;
bright were their eyes and deep their brows,
their hair was gold, their faces pale-
they passed through grove and under boughout of the West,
where dreamships sail.

Briseis


46 comments:

  1. Wow! Unique poetry and beautiful music. The imagery of the poem is
    outstanding.

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  2. WOW! she writes so well.I loved it.

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  3. the music and the poem blends well, very fine work.

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  4. exquiste poetry man. I am carried by your flow. In fact got envy, why i couldnt pen like you

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  5. Great written words here! I LoVed reading your last post..WOW! Thank you for introducing yourself to me as I love reading poetry! I'll visit again! :)NG

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  6. What wonderous words you share here Kuan... Thank You!

    As for my "Full Bloom..." I am absorbing the Light upon this cold, blowing, wintery day in the North. I am manifesting the "Law of Attraction" with all positive vibes enabling me to stay one step ahead of Life turning upside down (which only I have the power of choosing to happen... or NOT!).

    Can you feel me laughing?... because I am!

    :)

    Thank You for sharing energies with me my Friend...

    Libra Moon

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  7. A very talanted poet. Thanks for the post Kuan.

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  8. I adore Celtic sounds and words of times of past.

    Beautiful :o)

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  9. Pretty cool Kuan. I like the feeling of the poem. Thank you!

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  10. I think briseis is extremely talented janice...thank you

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  11. Greetings alex and starry...thank you

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  12. It is briseis pen known stranger, and I agree, she has quite the pen thank you

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  13. Warm Greeings pink ginger and thank you

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  14. Best wishes libra moon...

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  15. Thank you naturegirl...

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  16. eileen...hope you're continuing to enjoy your latest journey and I'm looking forward to your new tracks...enjoy!

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  17. angel feathers...you have an impressive pen...very impressive...thank you

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  18. Thanks Steve and trinitystar!

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  19. you are a talented poet and you knowit!

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  20. kuan, should give a title for this very beautiful post. :)

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  21. Lots of talent in her!
    Thanks for sharing Kuan!
    And thanks for your very nice visit!

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  22. beautiful!

    Now whos the pretty girl in that last pic?

    Keshi.

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  23. I like the heroic, larger than life tone - the good olden days...

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  24. tkkerovac...thank you, the writer is briseis...greetings

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  25. pink ginger...good point, she never titled it, I'll ask her...greetings and thank you...

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  26. Warm greetings margie...great stuff by you!

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  27. Hi Keshi...that picture is briseis, the author of this and very talented youn lady...

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  28. Greetings paul...thank you...I do too, I like the celtic feel...

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  29. Awesome!

    GBU
    Arti

    Warm greetings to you too my friend :)

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  30. Warm greetings arti...I'm sure coming from you this will make her very happy...thank you

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  31. greetings silent waves...thank you

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  32. This poem is stunning, the music is perfect, and I am warmed by both your visits to my blog, and that which you share in your blog.

    You have brought me smiles and I am grateful for that. You have brought me beauty in your post and that too I am grateful for. I look forward to many posts and exchanges with you friend.

    Be well.
    Muse

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  33. Thank you Muse...I love your blog...some really great things there...warm greetings

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  34. Warm greetings enemy of the republic...you have some powerful stuff over there, I really love visiting.

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  35. I'll go through your poetry again slowly. Need time to get into my mind...

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  36. There comes a time doesn't there, when we must rally around friends and give them the kind of support we have to offer as well as the support that they need. Such a time is here now.

    I have spoken to Eileen not too long ago over at feelingsaloud.blogspot.com and she has been on a long road trip. She's pretty tuckered out and I feel she could use a little encouragement from blogging friends.

    I wonder if you would mind going over to her site and just leaving a few encouraging words. I feel this would be very helpful and that she would really appreciate it.

    Consider it - okay? Thanks a lot. Goodlife.

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  37. Thank you Robert I will....

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  38. Warm Greetings kalpana!

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  39. she does write really well...quite a historic treat! how have you been Kuan! long time

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  40. Wow, that is a beautiful! I feel like that was an opening scene to a movie and I'm all ready to see what is next.

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  41. hi, how are you?
    I hope you are doing fine and smiling at life :)

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  42. That was lovely, she is very talented.

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