An enigma you are, ununderstood, unsolved
Crawling silently, a visitor uncalled
You come in and settle without a knock
And speak no words, there's nothing to talk
Face, body, colour, taste and smell you lack
Your presence is pregnant silence black
You look and find your image in my eyes
Slowly replaced by the vast skies
Wind of sorrow turbulent grips the sky tight
Poor sky is no match to the delirious might
It screams thunder and cries out rain
Then no wind or sky, only my trickling tears of pain
I need a shoulder to lean and cry
And a hand to soothe my sigh
You've caused my heart's turmoil and emptiness
I ask your identity,
you say, "My name is Loneliness".
Copyright-- Diksha Neel 2002
http://atta-deep-bhav.blogspot.com/
Crawling silently, a visitor uncalled
You come in and settle without a knock
And speak no words, there's nothing to talk
Face, body, colour, taste and smell you lack
Your presence is pregnant silence black
You look and find your image in my eyes
Slowly replaced by the vast skies
Wind of sorrow turbulent grips the sky tight
Poor sky is no match to the delirious might
It screams thunder and cries out rain
Then no wind or sky, only my trickling tears of pain
I need a shoulder to lean and cry
And a hand to soothe my sigh
You've caused my heart's turmoil and emptiness
I ask your identity,
you say, "My name is Loneliness".
Copyright-- Diksha Neel 2002
http://atta-deep-bhav.blogspot.com/
57 comments:
I find this both incredibly dark and beautiful...thank you mindinside...
Beautiful!!!!I luved it!
nice poetry..are they all yours?
Hmm...I came to know that the last one you had posted up.This one's nice too..
dark and surreal like you have said already.
Good job !
This is beautiful... but very sad!
She does not write often on her
blog... she should write more as
she writes so well.
very beautiful but very sad also!
Very powerful and profound piece of writing here. Kuan has this person published anything I can purchase?
Just beautiful.and deep."I need a shoulder to lean and cry
And a hand to soothe my sigh" I feel like tha sometimes.
no redemption they are not...at the bottom of each page is the author...I do have a few on here however...this person he is incredible with the images and feelings created...I've asked that she write more...
I'm unaware of any published work by her...however, I'm sure she'll stop by again and would be better to answer that....
I agree starry nights and meg...thank you for visiting
cinderella...yes, she doesn't have much there, however, it's really nice to get stuff like this out to others. Her blogs are few...she's a great writer...
Thank you Margie and aneesha...
Her beloved is also posted here a few blogs back...another great piece. Or you can go to her blog link at the bottom of this post to see it.
Thank you piika
Really nice words..beautiful and superb!!!
thanks for visiting our blog and that is really ace poem :)
Thankyou for stopping by~
Sounds like someone needs a hug:)
very nice though.
sad words but beautifully written.
Hi all...yes I do have an anthology of my poems published (when i was 14 years of age, almost 10 years back). It is, however, in Marathi, an Indian language.
ah to dive into lonliness... a dive that is really a dive into the deep longing for the beloved... that is a dive worth taking...
Lonliness...Something tht we hate when we have it n sometimes we ask "can u leave me alone"..Sometimes makes me feel its a necessary evil for some people....
"You look and find your image in my eyes"- This is a beautiful statement...Nice pick :)
diksha, I'd be real interested in seeing these, or purchasing it. Please post some more at your site...
I agree scribblez...my favorite line in that...
sudarshan...I agree...thank you...quite a pen there...
Thank you jumpinginpuddles, heidi, bossy britches for stopping by
asma & kathleen...thank you also for the comments...
that's very beautiful...her poems tugged my heart so...I've yet to check her blog but I will do so tomorrow morning as I've had a very long day :) Thanks for such a beautiful sharing :)
Thank you tiesha for visiting, I love your blog, but most importantly, the incredibly great things you do for humanity...great posts over there!
Thank you constance for visiting...
so deeep! luvly :-)
Great poem!
Just one sidenote - the music, gregorian... nice! Just got my coworkers wondering what the hell I was up to! :)
What a lovely and tasteful blog. Thank you for posting such thought-provoking poetry and images.
Thank you for visiting...shakhi, endevourme and Heart of darkness (of course the song is by Enigma "The Power of Love) :)
keith, rn...I like your blog...great life experiences and wonderful service to humanity...thank you
Beautiful, such a nice poetry.
Thnx for sharing:)
Takecare
hey thanks for dropping by at my place..
beautiful indeed
*smiles*
Thank you samrina & faith...tomorrow we'll be in Anchorage, Alaska where we'll begin a trek down the coast with numerous stops along the way. It will be a 10 day journey. I'll be back here upon our return. At that point I'll need a new song for August...best of wishes to all.
Hi there.
Thanks for dropping by ma blog. :) Appreciate it.;)
Have a good weekend!!!:D
Loneliness is indeed one of our closest friends at all times, yet so unwanted!
Beautiful poem!!
Beautiful....it has to be one of the best I have read off late...I think I should read the others as well.
Thank you neihal...I'm sure she'll really appreciate your kind comment!
Indeed strickly...thanks!
Thank you for visiting jewel rays...nice picture!
That was an excellent piece !!
absolutely amazing
This is so touching! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
what you say loniless as so much in negative sense.. who is there.. get her to imprisonment let her be flooded with poople, love, affection, care and let her realise how great lonliness is . let her deprive of lonliness only they she will know hte worth of it.
heihei.. i liked your writting but i love lonlines.
why enigma mysteriously lost his path and invisible . is it to be invinsible
Nice poem.... liked it so much
Thank you all for your kind comments!
Sorrow and yet beauty. Whoever wrote this is very, very heartfelt and talented!
I do hope you had a wonderful trip!
Are you back today?
Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness.
- Maya Angelou
KUAN!!! welcome back... how was Alaska??? :) and thank you so much... missed you! :)
Greetings Neers...incredible journey...I hope to post just a few pictures here in the future...beautiful endless landscape...whales, glaciers and a rolling pallet of wildlife and mountains...thank you
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